I find everything that you do a lot more hilarious now that I know you're black.
We should beat off together.
The guitar is so nauseating,
it sounds like an out of tune Epiphone SG running through a Line 6 with a Boss DS-1 distortion pedal recorded through a computer mic.
The vocals are also over the place. I'm not going to take a stab at your singing abilities, but at least sync the vocal track and EQ it. It peaks at odd times and just sounds.. awkward. All I hear is ".... Friend.... Mother fucker..... Son of a bitch.... Dog.. Why.."
Not a horrible musician, but, just put a little more effort into quality.
You know, I'm not going to bullshit and say that I'm a good producer, but I still think that the scummy guitar adds to the drunken shoddiness of the piece.
If you can't understand the lyrics though, that probably has more to do with your sound set up than anything, because it sounds fine to me through my headphones.
Either way, I've been working on redoing this track, because I sing and play this one in bars a whole lot. I can do it a lot better now than when I first shat it out in July. =p
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